1. LUKE
I wish you weren’t a genie!
GENIE looks up slowly [GENIE looks at him and smiles, LUKE gradually smiles back at her]
2. GENIE
So why do you think you’re such a loser?
LUKE
How do you know my name?
GENIE smiles
LUKE
[Shakes his head/rolls his eyes and walks out]
We recieved more feedback and were told that the script was quite effective and had improved. A mixture of dialogue and actions was now relevant improving it from before. There were no vast changes that needed implementing and the script stayed pretty much the same except for slight adjustments such as the changes above. This now allowed us to begin working on our storyboard and it is currently in progress
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